Date: 27 May 2009 - 09:58 am Title: 2 - In the Facility
After reading parts 1 & 2
This is a very refreshing story, sort of like 1984 with some hope thrown in. I see God's hand, too, working in what I assume is a godless society. Everything happens for a reason, and perhaps Marlon was intended to end up on E Deck. E Deck with Marlon reminds me of the little plant amid all the junk in Wall-E.
On another note ,your future society certainly seems to treat women VERY differently from the men - and to their benefit - if even with criminals, women get "shepherds" while men get "enforcers".
Congrats and hugs for a superior story so far.