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Reviewer: Sara Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting story, detailed but not over the top, then just as it gets interesting....................

Ahh the joy of the suspense

Keep up the good work

Reviewer: Renee M Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dear Deborah,

I like your story very much.  I usually read on BigCloset TopShelf; you are as good as the better authors there.  IMHO it's not that hard to learn to speak sounding quite a bit like a woman.  I would really like you to continue this story.  Leanne could buy/download a tutorial on line to learn to speak as a woman or someone might have a friend who's an actor, etc.  She might want to go out and interact in public or even to transition.

Even if you don't do more on this story, please continue your writing.

Big Hugs, Renee

Reviewer: kriss Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 1


Great build up with lots of detail of Ians journey . Await the next chapter as know Leanne can fill Ms Malin Jensens shoes with ease. What will Leanne's reward be from Tommy for a job well done 

Great story 


Reviewer: SassySue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2011 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1


Good first chapter.  You need to find some way to change Ian's voice (some sort of spray to tighten the vocal cords) and continue with the story of what happens when Ian takes Malin's place next week and what happens with the relationship with Tommy.  He should end up back as Leanne at the end.


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