Date: 02 Apr 2009 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1- Good Bye Daddy
Moving. Very moving. I suspect subsequent Chapters wil not produce sodeep nor so mant emotions this onedoes. I.E. Love, joy,remorse, sorrow, hate, vindictiveness.
That is an awful ,ot in one short chapter but you handled it well and smoother them into one contiguous story line. Thanx for sharing.
Author's Response:
This story has it all in varying degrees throughout the story