Date: 01 Feb 2009 - 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well this is a very goof story. When I read on I was surprised too that Julie's parents and sister all of a sudden accepted her for who she is. This acceptance is important. But even with this acceptance, things can go wrong. I am waiting for the next chaper.
Love & hugs,
Date: 16 Nov 2006 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like your story so far and the sense of mystery (doom) that you have added by hinting at a (sinister?) plan coming is perfect.
I can't wait for the next installment. One small sugestion is that you get a proofreader, there are a few errors in the story that could easily be corrected by having a someone with a new perspective give it a read through.