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Reviewer: Michelleblue Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2009 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story.  I will be searching the yard this summer for a four leaf clover and hoping to see a little green man....

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Reviewer: Mr Ram Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2009 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like magic wishes stories, this is a good one.

There are a few misspellings, mostly homonynms, that aren't easily picked up by a spell checker.

For instance you wrote " brazier"  when you ment "brassiere". The former is a container for fire, like a barbecue, the later is ladies underware. Im pretty sure you meant brassiere.

 

Mr. Ram

 

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