[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 - 07:52 pm Title: 4 - Excursions
I loved the story . I am so happy for them both . I can imaginne them as real people and as such wished the story was longer .I wish we aleast got to see them at his appartment and the wedding ....I am going to miss them . I wish tere were alot more stories like this one ,no humiliation just love between the people involved.
I wish I could tell you how I am going to miss them ...rereading the story will not be the same ...I want to thank you for such a nice warm time and a great adventure with just the right amount of natural affection and love making .
Stephen J
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2010 - 03:33 am Title: 4 - Excursions
A very sweet story :)
And true, it should be a even relationship. But mostly i expect all good relations to be 'give and take'. It's a very well written tale and I'm pleased to heve read it. Thanks.
And now for the critique :)
At times a little long, although i rally enjoyed the way you gave both perspectives :)
But very nice with a true 'flow' to it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2009 - 09:12 pm Title: 4 - Excursions
That was beautiful! I would love to see this story blossom into a novella or even a full-length novel.
Date: 21 Mar 2009 - 10:15 pm Title: 4 - Excursions
This story was a real gem,I kept thinking of a story I read years ago by H E Bates called triple echo a much darker tale,but the writing was that good.I look forward to reading more of your work.
Date: 05 Mar 2009 - 01:24 am Title: 4 - Excursions
What an exceptionally sweet love story! Bravo!
(I hope Lynn gets the receptionist job.)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2009 - 11:31 pm Title: 4 - Excursions
One of the best stories I have read on the four major sites and than some, thank you for sharing this.