Reviews For Little Pink Mini
Reviewer: Snarfles Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 19 Mar 2013 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Marvelous tale told well! did find a 'me' where a 'my' should be, and a 'me' that got missed in editing, so I'd suggest more proofreading; but it wasn't enough to detract from your talent much. My honest opinion is that this is a much longer and detailed story that has had its summary posted. You've got skill...show us all what'chya got girlfriend.
Reviewer: Stevensdave69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 02 Jan 2013 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
REALLY LIKES THIS STORY!
Reviewer: Renee Heart Signed 
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Date: 31 Aug 2012 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
An ok story. Does need more chapters this isn't enough not by a long shot. The dress for the sister & the curves so much more to cover.
Reviewer: Robret Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 - 05:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 31 Aug 2012 - 05:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Realy enjoyed this story. Good advice too!