Reader note
Peta
Just a minor but irritating point. Spell check makes sure A word is spelled correctly, but doesn't check usage. Here are a couple of examples in the first two paragraphs:
"A body started to fell from the stairs,", "Hot tears started to ran down like rivers."
I should read
"A body started to fall from the stairs,", "Hot tears started to run down like rivers."
These types of errors are a distraction from the story and really should be avoided.