Date: 18 Jun 2011 - 08:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this story. I would like it if you did write more about Leanne and what she gets up to.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 - 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for you review; i'm glad you enjoyed the story.
I haven't made up my mind what will happen to Leanne at the end of this story. I wrote the second chapter because I was inspired by the feedback I got about (what turned out to be) the first chapter. Sometimes I think of a change of direction midway through a chapter / story. This can be apparent as I don't always get the continuity right!
If there is enough interest then I will probably write more. Obviously, there is the prospect of Leanne meeting Paul's parents and I need to think about the next bit of espionage that Leanne is asked to do.
After that who knows!?!
Hope you will keep reading,
Date: 16 Jun 2011 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Leeane is cute who wouldn't fall for such a lovley young woman. This was a good story, but I still have a few questions lengeriing in my mind. Does Leanne permently become Leaane (as in 100% transition in to a girl)?, what about her job will she still have to impersonate these other women?, How do Paul's parent's take her & do they get Merried?