Reviews For Little Pink Mini
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Reviewer: Snarfles Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Marvelous tale told well!   did find a 'me' where a 'my' should be, and a 'me' that got missed in editing, so I'd suggest more proofreading; but it wasn't enough to detract from your talent much.  My honest opinion is that this is a much longer and detailed story that has had its summary posted.  You've got us all what'chya got girlfriend.

Reviewer: Stevensdave69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Renee Heart Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

An ok story. Does need more chapters this isn't enough not by a long shot. The dress for the sister & the curves so much more to cover.

Reviewer: Robret Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 - 05:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Realy enjoyed this story. Good advice too!

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