Date: 23 May 2009 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very Nice story. I enjoyed it and hope to see more of your writing in the future.
Regards,
KK
Date: 30 Jan 2009 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Good stpry short sweet and to the point but you could have goon in to detail about when Lucy came home and found Robin That would have been an intresting part that you should include in the story.