Could happen!  Fun story.  Seems to be turning both her and Kevin into happy horny homemakers. Amazingly it seems fairly believable as there are many hidden messages in words, pictures and probably music in advertising and have been for decades. I don't know for sure about music.  Subliminal messages are similar in some ways to hypnotism.  And one day they may actually change peoples lives.   

      The thesis or story kernel is good and the body of the story is very well developed (yes there is a pun there sorry).  Maybe you left it open to add more episodes, but the end or climax of the story doesn't really wrap things up.  I would definitely read more episodes and that would round out the story.  All in all a good tale and thank you so much for sharing.  I really do like your perspective as a woman.  

      Hugs, Kristi  

     Cute story but not much depth.  I wlll take it as is , but would be nice to deal with the real issues that are going to become huge soon.  Showing by telling in terms of many details, strong  emotions, and painfull crisis could be more memorable and allow us to attach to the characters in a greater way.  Am really enjoying this though, don't get me wrong.

     Hugs, Kristi

     Oh you meanie another cliffhanger!  OK you got me and probably mom is in the know, but maybe not and the poor boy has no idea of course with these conniving women.  I do really like this and all the fun a couple can have.  Do we have a latent lesbian here?  Like the story very much.

     Hugs, Kristi

Nice start but so much more to cover. Hope you continue as you write very well. Story looks very promising.

Hugs, Kristi